Holistic Feedback Report

Holistic Feedback ReportOverallSTUDENT04, on a scale of one to six, your response to this assignment was rated a 5. Your response was evaluated on the basis of how well it communicates its message considering important areas of writing including focus and meaning, content and development, organization, language use and style, and conventions and mechanics.A response that receives a score of five communicates its message effectively. Typically, a response at this level is generally cohesive and unified with a central idea that is maintained throughout the response. A response at this level has generally well developed ideas, with strong support based on examples, evidence or other supporting details. The response is well organized, with a generally effective pattern of ideas and a logical sequence presented. The sentence structure is generally effective, varied and free of errors, although there may be some minor errors in structure, usage and word choice. There are few errors in grammar, mechanics, punctuation and spelling that do not interfere with the message. A more detailed analysis of your response is provided for each of the five important writing areas below. Writing Analysis Your response was also evaluated in terms of five important traits of writing, focus and meaning, content and development, organization, language use and style, and mechanics and conventions. Each of the five areas was evaluated on a scale ranging from one to six.

Effects of Technology

The technological influence has been very profound, life medium have no thing is and science and technology is irrelative, even hinging upon technological convenience. And along with science and technology continuous development, also have very great influence to our living environments. In order to beg existence and beg better existence environment, the mankind fight for existing space toward the great universe continuously, bringing the environment infinite impact and the change.Increase quickly along with the population, science and technology advances by leaps and bounds continuously, the mankind's influence accelerates and extends influence scope continuously, giving sufficient time to evolve forest to shrink, the water pollution, soil run off, diverse sex of the air pollution, ozone layer hole, living creature reduce, desert's turning even may cause a global climate change. Mankind's influence to great universe is just limited in an earth's surface, but extends to the atmosphere, and by exercise of the atmosphere, will influence gradual Bu and world, raise the possibility of global warming significantly.The scientist is also therefore surprised to feel weather not only changeable, more possible because the mankind's excessive development and the occurrence more violent variety. By above we know currently the breakage been subjected to by environment have much serious, water pollution, air pollution, the etc. environment of the garbage problem problem, not only influence our healths and quality of life, but also is a serious influence to live together with us of move a plant.But we now already the body be placed in to flood in many environments of bane factors, the occupational disease, abnormal state building symptoms, water Yu disease is just iceberg dime, so know how to protect oneself to be free from is endangered by it also is one of the modern people required curriculums.For the sake of our own quality of life and the posterity descendant and live together with us at the same of on the earth of creation, we can't just attend to make money and enjoy the convenience that science and technology brings, even want to understand the environment that we live and currently the problem faced, even want to the utmost it ability of decrease, avoid breakage.Because the population increases toward the city rapid concentration, vehicle and public construction Pin, causing a traffic noise, public works voice, car to exhaust waste gas etc. problem;Along with the fast development of industry, the factory exhausts of the problems such as pollution and factory noise etc. of waste water, waste gas...etc. are also gradually serious.In order to insure citizen's health, maintenance living environment, at the industry flourishing nation, the pollution of the environment prevention and cure becomes urgent matter of the moment.

The Power of Nature

1.Q:Have you ever experienced a natural disaster? What happened? Describe your experience.1.A:The most severe disaster that I have ever met is a typhoon.Rain that it rains makes not only the drain against the current of my house, and still harm my mother to fall down.2.Q:Which natural disaster do you think causes the most harm? Why?2.A:I think the volcano explosion is the most serious disaster, it will cause the magma indulge in atrocities, the air dust variety of excessive and big thunder-storm, earthquake and the atmosphere temperature.These varieties will make hard existence of living creature.

ALCPT 16R

18. Mr. Maxwell said: “This wind feels just like a knife.” What kind of wind was it?19. Maurice finished his studies at a quarter to eight. When did he finish his studies?20. Highway accidents can be kept at a minimum if everyone follows safety rules. How can we minimize accidents?21. Did anyone of your friends call on you?22. The weatherman said it might rain tomorrow. What is the weather going to be like tomorrow?23. Peter quitted working after sunset. When did he stop?24. The driver reached his destination with very little gasoline

Terrific Trees: Nature's Treasures

1.Q:Which one of these facts about trees is the most interesting to you? Why?1.A:I can provide for: the annual rings of the tree relevant in former days the ecosystem environment affairs really slices information, including the weather disaster to change with the natural calamity.The mankind appear at on the earth however millions year, have history about only have several thousand years, so the annual rings can provide us do not record to of history information, let us prevent future disaster from changing.2.Q:Have you ever seen any fascinating or famous trees? If so, describe them.2.A:I think I didn't seen any fascinating or famous trees.3.Q:Besides these advantages are important to us?Do you describe more benefites from terrific trees?3.A:The root of the tree will hold tight soil, and the soil will absorb, keep humidity, so say forest it has the function of the self-restraint headwaters, he can make the water of the river not sudden rise after pouring rain, can also make consecution several days don't rain very much of the river isn't withered.And the animal lived because of forest of place, make ecosystem equilibrium.